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vbollz
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Tue May 06, 2014 3:09 am |
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once upon a time, in a world far far away. there was a happy colony named Greeny. but then a tragedy happened. nukes rained on greeny's colony for 40 days and 40 nights. His colony glowed green for a hundred and fifty days, and every workers on the face of his colony was wiped out. Finally after that tragedy greeny's colony will live in our hearts. The End
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Yellowhairedme
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Tue May 06, 2014 12:39 pm |
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vbollz wrote: once upon a time, in a world far far away. there was a happy colony named Greeny. but then a tragedy happened. nukes rained on greeny's colony for 40 days and 40 nights. His colony glowed green for a hundred and fifty days, and every workers on the face of his colony was wiped out. Finally after that tragedy greeny's colony will live in our hearts. The End Best One. BAHAHaHA Extra 1000 reds from my side
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Cedricisfinal
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Wed May 07, 2014 4:24 pm |
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9/25/2337
Day 291
Dear diary,
A UFO crashed into our space station, PLO, today. The UFO contained more workers, it was a very odd sight to witness. We sent a shuttle out there to investigate the UFO, but what we found were more workers. The workers are currently being held in captivity and being watched 24/7. If they join us on the working crew, I don't know what the others will think of them.
My one year anniversary is only 3 months away, most workers get turned into frigates on their one year anniversary. If I'm going to be a pilot, I better start training myself as soon as possible.
Until then, Commander Cedric Out
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kavita39
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 3:16 am |
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It was a very tense moment... i could either make 2 choices either press enter and switch off and sleep or stay up and play bd if i stayed up and played... i knew i was gonna miss the war which was to start next morning or either i could sleep blah blah blah....
anyways the real story
the tank boy was very nervous.... he had been brought into the army only 6 ticks ago and had trained vigorously since then... he knew that his hp was low but his range was excellent. he was now going into the first battle of his life... and it could well be his last. But he was not afraid, he had more than a 1000 like him alongside and they were also fresh out of training.... they all had heard about their predecessors and how they had died while fighting 300 battalions.. the war started.... round 1 the tank boy knew it was the end.. he could feel it, his lips and become dry, there was a knot in his stomach and he knew that their whole armour was just wiped and half of his buddies had also died while they had managed to take out only 20% of their army round 2 but he did not knew that someone somewhere and set fire.... the enemy was burning.... attack someone shouted .. ... .... ... blindness..
when the tank boy's eye opened he was in a hospital
it was known later on that everyone had died that day excluding his because he had devil's own luck and had landed in a trench after the blast and knocked him unconscious
he was awarded with a new tank and 1 which could fire a great deal be4 that anyone..
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GreenDayIsBack1
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 6:59 pm |
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Joined: Wed Jul 25, 2012 11:54 am Posts: 372 Location: Greenys Gender: male
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vbollz wrote: once upon a time, in a world far far away. there was a happy colony named Greeny. but then a tragedy happened. nukes rained on greeny's colony for 40 days and 40 nights. His colony glowed green for a hundred and fifty days, and every workers on the face of his colony was wiped out. Finally after that tragedy greeny's colony will live in our hearts. The End I'm done, you win oz. Btw get on skype sometime.
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vbollz
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 10:47 pm |
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GreenDayIsBack1 wrote: vbollz wrote: once upon a time, in a world far far away. there was a happy colony named Greeny. but then a tragedy happened. nukes rained on greeny's colony for 40 days and 40 nights. His colony glowed green for a hundred and fifty days, and every workers on the face of his colony was wiped out. Finally after that tragedy greeny's colony will live in our hearts. The End I'm done, you win oz. Btw get on skype sometime. yey greeny gonna give me reds :cheers:
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Hitmo
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 11:32 pm |
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Joined: Fri May 17, 2013 1:51 am Posts: 1236 Location: India Gender: male
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I doubt 2 of the judges whose name begins with letter 'a' , hmmm......... I guess some changes are required xD
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abeyant
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Fri May 09, 2014 11:51 am |
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Joined: Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:55 pm Posts: 307 Location: San Jose, CA, USA Gender: male
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I already won guys, don't remember. Poor souls wasting time with their incomparable stories abeyant wrote: There once was a boy who played BD. His name is Ads126 and he is a legend Where are my blues at?
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kanha15
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 12:41 am |
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BATTLE DAWN a REAL HEARTSTOPPER! on the strock of midnight, the bugel of war was blown.. and then THE WAR started. it was WaL verses SoLD . Though we were been backstabbed and killed but that erawas just amazing and will always remain in my heart. THIS IS BATTLEDAWN!!... JUST INCREADIBLE. it gives like this memories to the players who really love it. BATTLE DAWN is not just a game, its a whole world inside the internet where the best players meet to showcase their talents. ITS something that allows a player to know how the world is. all the possibilities that can happen in a deadly battle are all present. the exicetment, betrayals, allies, backstabs and obviously addiction. true friends and enemies are made here. Players don't play this for fun, they just love it (including me) that's why they invest their money and time. And I am one of those players who is really addicted to this game. therefore, I say east or west BATTLE DAWN is the BEST!!!! cheers...
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Cedricisfinal
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Post subject: Re: Battle Dawn Short story contest! 1000 BLUE TOKENS TO WIN!!! Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 12:52 am |
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Joined: Thu Apr 10, 2014 9:56 pm Posts: 13
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Assuming more than one entry allowed
BD Haiku
An afternoon breeze my range four are destroying this war is over
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